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ThePrayers0faBrokenHeart
Junior Member

since 2006-03-19

Posts 10
guam, harmon

0 posted 2006-07-03 09:09 AM

dear man of my dream
i do not know who you are, or where or when we will meet, but I do hope its soon.

I pray that when we meet and fall inlove, you will love me, for me, and not hope for someone who is thinner or prettier.I hope you don't compare me to girls who may have brighter smiles. I hope that you will make me laugh, take care of me when I get sick, and be trustworthy.

I hope you will remember that I prefer daises to roses, and that my favorite color changes with my mood. Please know that my eyes aren't blue they're dark brown with black shade.

Please know that I might be too shy to kiss first, but please don't be afraid to kiss me. I won't slap you or push you away. I'm sure your kisses will be perfect.When we go on a date , please don't stress about where to take me; what's important is that I'l be with you.

If I cry, please know it isn't because of you, just hold me close, and I'll heak quickly. And, if it is because of you, I'll heal just the same.

And if we decide to break up, please understand that I mau be bitter, but I'd like to be your friend if you'll let me. I promise to remember that you have feelings too, even though you'll never admit it, and when you are ready we'll have a friendship.

Please tell me if anything I do bothers you, or if something just doesn't sit right. I would like you to always be honest with me. If I have a bad day, I hope you will shower me with confidence and smiles.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-07-03 09:21 AM

That's cool. It's like a letter. Do most letters end that way? I didn't think they did. Maybe you could add a bit more and end it like a letter. I like the idea though. Very cute.

                  Jessica

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-07-09 01:07 AM

Humm… Well, basically what I have to say mimics Jessica, I agree on this being an interesting setup. I don’t usually see many letters written and posted on pip so that was a nice surprise.

Yet, I felt like the ending left us hanging, like you should continue the story, write more to make it seem complete. Maybe you wanted to leave us “hanging” like that but I feel like you should polish it off some, no offence…Also you have a few spelling errors you might want to fix.

I loved the scheme of it all though, how you were writing to your “Dream-man” that’s pretty cool. Cause I think all of us at one time or other has written to someone like that. So I can relate!

Anyway, good write by you, loved the setup! Thanks for sharing

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