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I_heart_rock
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since 2005-11-26
Posts 10


0 posted 2005-12-06 11:16 PM



Alone

Alone, its empty,
shallow and cold,
wont give u love,
or someone to hold,

it will give u anger,
Make u turn black,
Thanks to alone,
It will give u that,

Ull never win against it,
A war already won,
Let alone be ur safe place,
Until ur life is done,

Ull cry urself to sleep,
Lying by the phone,
Alone is all u will feel,
cutting to the bone,

It’s the only word that echoes,
In the dark of night,
All that will be shown,
Are black circles in the light,

It won’t bring u laughter,
Or the joy u seem to lack,
Maybe a few sleepless nights,
Alone will give u that,

The tears will all drain out,
Just lay quit and still,
Alone will take your pride,
Destroy all of ur will,

Alone is the enemy,
Trust me when I say,
U try to run faster and faster,
But ull never get away,

The feeling deep inside,
The pit of all u feel,
It will stay forever,
Ull just have to deal,

Ull be longing for tht someone,
Who never seems to come,
Ull soon realize its over,
Alone uve become,

No one can fight it,
So just let it be,
For u see being alone,
Has already killed me…

-jess

  

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AtLsHawTy17
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 60
IL,
1 posted 2005-12-07 12:04 PM


that was really good, i feel ya
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
2 posted 2005-12-07 02:56 PM


enjoyed.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Sexy
Member
since 2005-11-25
Posts 53

3 posted 2005-12-07 06:49 PM


I really enjoyed reading this poem....
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