This Reads Like A Child's Book

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #7

This Reads Like A Child's Book

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2005-12-05 12:15 PM

i'm a dreamer, sometimes my dreams are so vivid and transparent. like daylight in a movie at 9 in the night. i know that its not real, yet i swear that when i walk outside the sun will smile instead of wink. these dreams are life through the curtains. it is filtered, keeping the clouds obstructed while pure light shines into my lap. its the most silent waterfall. a pool of imagination. beneath the warmth of this visual bath lie rocks of reality. dashers of hope. people that drink out of the pool and never return to fill it up. all that sharing dries up the stream bed pretty fast.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2005-12-09 09:54 PM

This was an extremely good piece of writing. Have you ever considered trying to write a short story for the prose section? I do think you would be very good - your visuals are very clear and concise.

Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2005-12-13 01:29 AM

i cant keep my mind focused enough to write prose.
...i swear i have ADD...

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.