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intention
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0 posted 2005-11-14 01:55 PM



I  SEE  PINK..
       IN  UR  SMILE...
I  SEE  GREEN...
       IN  UR CARE N CONCERN..
I  SEE  RED...
       IN  UR  ANGER...
I  SEE  BLUE...
       IN  UR  ENCOURAGEMENT...
I  SEE  WHITE...
       IN  UR  LOVE  N  AFFECTION...

U  HAVE  GIVEN  ME  A  BEAUTIFUL  RAINBOW  OF  HAPPINESSS...
AFTER  MEETING  U ..I  DISCOVERED  MYSELF...
COZ  NOW  I  KNOW  WHO  U  R...
U  R  LIKE  A  SHINNING  STAR  ....0

TO  WHOM  I  CAN  LOOK  UPTO...
WHENEVER  I  M  DOWN...
WHENEVER  I  FEEL  DARKNESS...
I  KNOW  THAT  U  WILL  BE  THERE  AS  A  RAY  OF LIGHT ...
......AS  A  RAY  OF  HOPE...
......THNX  FOR  EVERYTHING ....


i wrote this when i was very happy ...and i was so much lost in that happiness that i forgot what m i writing .... plz comment (lol)

Love me for who i m

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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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2 posted 2005-11-14 07:57 PM


I disagree hellabounds...I think there definitely can be happiness. A cruel trick is overarching optimism..(though that could be simply labelled as foolishness) but happiness isn't a trick at all, especially knowledgeable happiness, meaning the kind of happiness that occurs when you realize that there is still horrors out in the world, but when you're still happy. Some say ignorance is bliss, but i disagree with them too...Ignorance is temporary bliss, that can easily be stolen away by disappointment. However, if you know and expect all possible disasters, and can still be happy about current situations...yeah, that's happiness....


SORRY INTENTION! haaha, good job on this, i really liked this!

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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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3 posted 2005-11-14 07:58 PM


I'm sorry...i REALLY liked this. I reread it, and realized i totally missed what i read before. FANTASTIC JOB on this...grammatical errors corrected and you have an A+++++++....I really enjoyed this one.

<3keryn

When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad I'm better.
Mae West

intention
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since 2005-11-13
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New Delhi, INDIA
4 posted 2005-11-15 08:10 AM


thank you so much all ur responses...
i dont know what other people consider happiness as but then i feel happy on every small things in this world
it might be my illusion to consider it but i think to be happy in this world u need to feel tht freshness of happiness everywhere..if ur inside is willing to accept all chages then u r happy ..
i dont know if m right but its the way i m ...

lol  

Love me for who i m

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