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Teen Poetry #7

II. A Midnight Hue

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
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0 posted 2005-11-08 08:37 PM

II.

Things fade to a midnight hue
   as i lay      yearning
to belong         to you
  the way i once did
          held
close to the bosom of your heart     and soul
          cherished
a brilliant memory     of an awesome connection
          shared
by two souls     now seperated
          ended
but never over
          never
to fade          to a midnight hue

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

[This message has been edited by Kaos (11-09-2005 05:57 PM).]

skoolyardturtle
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 96

1 posted 2005-11-09 08:43 PM

a good write,
"but never over never to fade to a midnight hue"
a strangely satisfying ending
good job

I want life in every word, to the extent that it's absurd.- The Postal Service

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

2 posted 2005-11-11 12:51 PM

thanks much

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

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