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My special love
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My special love |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
My Special Love You wait your entire life For that special love. Then it is unreachable. Perhaps because of fear, Or perhaps because of love itself. A special love that Leaves and emptiness within you If you can not hear the Other person’s voice. But that makes you feel Whole again with one Gentle Hello. A special love of longing Night after night For just the sight of them Or just the feeling of knowing They may care too. A love that you know in this lifetime You will never feel again Nor would ever want to feel again, If it brings you this much pain not to have it. Oh, my special love Please come to me My special one please hold me And tell me this not all for nothing. That deep within your soul Your love is the same as mine. Can’t you see we belong together? We need each other To make our lives complete. My only one, My treasured one, My special love. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
Excellent! A beautiful piece. I completely enjoyed the 2 or 3 times i read it. There was just this awesome sense of being subdued to something greater than your own personal self, i loved it. Good write "Do not go gentle into that good night, |
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DestinedSuccess Junior Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 12California, |
its sad when you have that special love.. but the other does not feel the same way.. good write though I like it.. it has meaning and depth |
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ska babe Member
since 2005-11-08
Posts 58nowwhere, IN |
I really like that alot! |
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ska babe Member
since 2005-11-08
Posts 58nowwhere, IN |
I really like that alot! |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
chris i really like this good write.. laura |
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