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Loneliness (revised) or.... Loneliness (original)
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Loneliness (revised) or.... Loneliness (original) |
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the kid Junior Member
since 2005-06-24
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Loneliness (revised) Loneliness kills you like an uncured disease it’s a burning desire a want and a need to have someone there when all is not right and no hope is near for when life's brought you down and put you in tears It goes to your mind and attacks all your fears mostly the fear that nobody cares that nobody’s there but don’t let it win and give up the fight for if you do this you'll never be right your life will be ruined and you'll never find light just cause you let loneliness win and take control of your mind. That or...... Loneliness (original) Lonliness hurts, its a burning desire it feels as if your hearts constantly on fire it makes you feel empty inside like something is missing like somethings not right some keep it hidden and continue to deny that the feeling is there and still burning bright its like a disease no cure is in sight it refuses to die, its just keeps growing in your mind some say their fine some keep it confined deep inside but all you are doing is ignoring the signs that disease has won and possesed your mind but you can fight it by remembering the past and all the good times that you had enjoyed for memories last forever and theyll always keep you sane just never give up and let it win just keep fighting until the very end. |
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