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the kid
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since 2005-06-24
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0 posted 2005-10-31 09:55 PM



Now I am lost, lonely and confused wherever I go, I go   batterd and bruised, my friends are all gone and my loves are all lost my dreams are now memories that i seem to have tossed, my feelings are gone yet i seem to not care not even when good news may rarely appear i wish i could smile i wish i could laugh i wish for one day that i am not sad that everything goes right and nothing goes bad.......only if wish's came true.

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young_blood
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since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
1 posted 2005-12-03 03:46 PM


i'd try to put this in some type of form instead of just a paragraph with no breaks or punctuation. anyway, hope stuff gets better for you.
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