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0 posted 2005-10-22 02:47 AM



From the first day I heard your name,
My heart was floating on its way,
You took me by surprise,
When I looked in your angelic eyes,

as days passed by, months now came,
each moment not being with you,
Became an unbearable pain,

I kept myself away from you,
giving you the run around,
but that one afternoon I said hello,
and in your response, I drowned,

For you, I thought sweet thoughts,
and wrote lines of loves,
Feelings of love I desperately fought,
telling my friends about you a lot,

my mind was filled with you all day,
and at night I dreamt you as I lay,
In the morning I awaken to a new day,
Filled with hope to see you today,

when you wore the dress I like,
it felt if I was dreaming in daylight,
as you made your way to give me a hug,
my mind received its daily dose of drug,

The time that we spent together,
made me feel complete,
the days I did not see you,
made it all that more sweet,

when I would see you alone,
would give you the biggest hug,
the pain of it made you groan,
but the smile on your face said it all,

Summers we spent walking in the park,
saw two bunnies doing it in on the grass,
thought this relationship would always last,
but who knew it would come to pass.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
greco
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since 2003-09-27
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1 posted 2005-10-24 09:52 PM


For you, I thought sweet thoughts,
and wrote lines of loves,
Feelings of love I desperately fought,
telling my friends about you a lot,


i couldnt say it any better
amazing write and i know exactly how you feel for this is the same thing i am going through. i feel this poem should be on a card or something great write

A person will sometimes devote all his life to the development of one part of his body - the wishbone

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