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electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 184
far away from home.

0 posted 2005-10-20 07:32 PM



i placed my being inside of him.
  let him finger my pride, my nativity-
he became my guide underneath
               the false disguise
of love.

“run away and save yourself.
     run away to a place that is home,
     let it become your own…”

sinking gut as the c l o s u r e
       F
             A
                    L
                          L
                                 S
deep inside,
     a wound you could never hide.

and i’m just trying to
                   find myself…
find myself within him
                   one last time…


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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2005-10-31 07:35 PM


mmm. moving.
skoolyardturtle
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 96

2 posted 2005-11-02 10:21 PM


this is good...and original, i don't think i've read anything like it. nice
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