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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
i look into her eyes everytime she writes i watch as she pours her heart out onto the paper i see the invisible tears she cries sometimes her words are sdo ful of hate so angry, so painful i fear the thinks its too late she thinks i cant see the truth but her eyes never lie i see her falling down i wish i could understand why i wish she would open up to me just admit her pain and cry seeing her hurt kills me i dont want either of us to die i just want her to be happy i want her suffering to go away i want to see her write with laughter about the pain thats gone away and most of all i want her to know that i love her with all my heart and that i'll be here til the end just like ive been here from the start {in a million years i wont be over you} |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"and most of all i want her to know that i love her with all my heart and that i'll be here til the end just like ive been here from the start" Then give her this poem! |
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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
wow that was awesome great job damn.... Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I agree, it's a gift to be recieved! |
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Sexy Member
since 2005-11-25
Posts 53 |
i think your poem is pretty good it relates to my sister that is suicidal when she writes she can write for hours and you can see her pain. |
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