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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent 
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I was cold so I turned the air down. The music was too loud and I turned it up. I made my bed so I went to sleep. I woke up and unmade it. The phone rang so I hung it up. You look at me and smile, I turn around and frown. LOVE NEEDS TO DIE |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It was pretty plain and simple. although I'm not quite sure what you're trying to accomplish with this poem.... keep posting though  |
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