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tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-09-12 09:24 PM


wow i havent been around here in forever alots been goin on with school and all. hope you enjoy.


My heart cries out a love song;
hoping that you will hear.

My hands steer around town;
thinking you will be near.

My eyes search for hours;
wanting to see you in the stands.

My feet walk around for days;
remembering the last time we held hands.

My soul realizes after a few months;
that you are forever gone.

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16
Posts 248

1 posted 2005-09-14 11:08 PM


Awwww...Laura!! i know this so well...ugh, unfortunately. Oh well, great job on this one!

<3kerR

I might have messy hair, runny makeup and a tear-steaked face, but at least I know I have loved.

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
2 posted 2005-09-15 02:56 AM


isnt it awful whawt males can do to us.... but on the other side its sooo good too... well written ive been thru it a few times my self so i know how your feeling.. in time the pain and memories fade if you want them too...
keep your head high and smile showing.... and keep writing too
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

StarryEyed3
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since 2005-06-26
Posts 58
bostonia
3 posted 2005-09-15 11:31 PM


sounds like you need a hug too! i loved this though... brought back some of my own. thanks for sharing

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..."   -death cab

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