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Until Tomorrow... |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248
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She cried for him yesterday She smiled at him today She will yell out for him tonight and Tomorrow He'll remember. He seeked her out yesterday while she cried. He ignored her today when she smiled. He'll hear her yell out tonight and Tomorrow He'll feel guilty Yesterday they were two worlds apart. And today they denied what they are Tonight it will end with a tear and Tomorrow will be here all too soon. Can't you see they are dying inside? And won't you try to fight, try to keep them alive? Cause yesterday went away and now it is gone. and today they missed out on the life that they want. Tonight will be lonely for both as they try to combine their two worlds into one So for now they will miss what they never had at least.. Until tomorrow... Hey guys! I'm back!...Definitely not my best or favorite poem, but whatever. Enjoy if you do, if not, I'm not surprised. <3 Keryn<3 You know? I thought you were smart...But you cant see what is directly in front of your face... |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
hey i loved it yeah i havent written in a while either laura LOVE NEEDS TO DIE |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
is this thing working....? ugh You know? I thought you were smart...But you cant see what is directly in front of your face... |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
Thanks Laura!!!!!!!!! LoL I'm in such a good mood. I def. dnt like this poem. whatever though. <3 much love <3kerR You know? I thought you were smart...But you cant see what is directly in front of your face... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Bonjourno.... ....i have come out of my hiatus to comment on this poem lol  Very well done on this. You have a great flow and kept with the idea throughout the poem. Very well written, I must say. ps: u r a cutieeeeeeee haha adi0s and keep posting  javier~ |
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