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Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2005-09-01 10:50 AM

I dare to be different     you call me a freak
I wanna be heard    but you don't let me speak
I'm down     and you wonder why!?
not a day passes        that doesn't make me cry,
I gaze in the mirror    and looking at me
isn't the same person   i used to see.
Looks haven't changed   but deep in the eyes
a world is seen    veiled in lies
I see the reflection of  a heartbroken child,
his sanity slipping   his feelings defiled.
Emotionally raped  by the people he needed,
backs turned on him   raped and then cheated.
Shattered look   a tear streaked cheek,
Finally     broken     unable to speak.

"Aerials, in the sky,
When you lose small mind,
You free your life."
- System of a Down

skoolyardturtle
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 96

1 posted 2005-09-01 02:31 PM

i don't know what to say, it was just...wow...
this was a great write. great job

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

2 posted 2005-09-01 06:21 PM

"Shattered look a tear streaked cheek,
Finally broken unable to speak. "

I loved how you ended it. The whole poem was amazing, I'm sorry that you feel/felt like this. Great Job

Erin

AIM-blueyed angel940
She's a question without answers...

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

3 posted 2005-09-01 10:35 PM

thanks for the comments, like i've said before, it makes it easier to post when people reply, However, i must request that you don't feel sorry for me... what i go through is my path in life that i'm to face and hardship is just part of that, but we all have our writing to escape and i'm sure we're all thankful for that... anyway i'm rambling, thanks again for the comments

"Aerials, in the sky,
When you lose small mind,
You free your life."
- System of a Down

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

4 posted 2005-09-03 09:31 PM

Wow, I LOVED this. I'm adding this to my library...Fantastic.

<3keryn

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

5 posted 2005-09-12 11:21 PM

whoop whoop... im hyper but i like ur poem i dont think i have ever read anything of yours before... i havent been here in a while... good write...

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

StarryEyed3
Member

since 2005-06-26

Posts 58
bostonia

6 posted 2005-09-15 11:08 PM

aw it sounds like you need a hug! great write, very powerful, even though you broke my heart a little.

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..." -death cab

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

7 posted 2005-10-11 11:57 AM

Thank you all for the wonderful comments, you're all too kind

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

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