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Teen Poetry #7

cave

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2005-08-19 03:17 AM

will this sadness
ever truly leave
it overwhlems
i can't breathe
no one deserves
to feel like this
but i don't know how
to let you go
you are everything
and i am nothing
but empty and alone...

bergundy

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2005-08-20 02:07 PM

Such a heartfelt piece. Many people have been in that place, me included. If this is true to life, you don't need to feel like you're nothing. I hope things get better.

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

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