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0 posted 2005-08-13 03:00 AM


Many nights I lay awake,
Thinking thoughts,
Gathering them one at a time,
Knowing that after all the years
My life will come to a pass,
The last moments of my life
Will have memories of you,
And an empty scotch glass.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
skoolyardturtle
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1 posted 2005-08-18 10:00 AM


i like this one, good job.
fearing-laughter
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2 posted 2005-08-25 05:26 PM


the ending was a punch, at first i was like okay another semi generic poem you know but then the last line came out and i was just like damn...

hopefully that makes sense

bergundy

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

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