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Teen Poetry #7

molding her.

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

0 posted 2005-07-30 07:49 PM

digging deep into the
microphone,
the air
         --being sucked away so quickly.
lungs shutting off
at the sight of their eyes.
sing us a song,
some smashed up lyrics,
open yourself up.
           and i’m sick, i’m sick, i’m gone today.
i’m fading away from these
          --what is he telling me? (intentions).
dirty floor and those fluorescent lights.
     no sound as i am stripped to the core,
having nothing to bear but
          ...a written out soul,
with the words dripping and
the voices tripping,
so far out into the distance but yet
so close to home
in between the flesh of my ear
drums.

            (breathe)
     but this is not who they want you to be.

skoolyardturtle
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 96

1 posted 2005-08-02 01:10 AM

i love this, every line just goes together so well.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2005-08-23 02:01 AM

yeah this is groovy especially the last two lines...it's so frantic at first and the space is literally almost like you took a breath. neat

bergundy

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2005-09-03 10:27 PM

wow.
incredible.
I love the flow.

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