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tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-07-28 12:46 PM



I have jumped off a boat in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean.

I have climed up a mountain.(a small one)

I have gone to school with complete strangers.

I have bungie jumped.

So I can deal with you.

The more I hear you talk the less I am afraid.

Just like before I did all these things.
The more I talked about doing them, the less I was afraid.

I am not afraid to stand up to you or to tell you how I feel.

I am not too scared to end this so called relationship.

Try me.

© Copyright 2005 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
aussie teen
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Australia
1 posted 2005-07-28 08:01 AM


nice work laura..... love the way you have written this one... keeep up the positive writing girl.... loven it..
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
2 posted 2005-07-29 08:01 PM


thanks ruth!
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