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latelyluv New Member
since 2005-07-09
Posts 5AR, United States |
Upset, down and out Wait a minute let me tell you What it's all about I've been hurt several times before But now, I don't know what to do All at one time People talkin' 'bout me, hatin' on me, judgin' me criticizin' me, I'm only 16 can't the people see. People make mistakes That dosen't mean you can make it hard on them. Like, Love, Friendship What type of positon is this You've told me what love I had to open my eyes and see I wasn't a murderer I was in love To the power times three I had to open up, create some thing, do some things, Believe All things are possible But now you sittin in my face Like you some judgementive apostle I've wrote plenty before You acted like you didn't see Now you're lying on the floor in dis-grace A face I can't believe But remember all things are possible I've had my black gloves on the entire time So pick your heart up because this love was too Blind |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
nice |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, sounds like some venting going on here  it was good! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
interesting write, how some things never change...ignore them, your best friend is you...but in the same, always remember, people will talk, but by not giving them anything to talk about, will deem your brillance.... Good Write, vent on!!! |
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StarryEyed3 Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 58bostonia |
very nice! i especially love the last part. cant wait to read more... "and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been |
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