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electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05
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far away from home.

0 posted 2005-07-17 07:14 PM




i.

we had so much more
when we could count our
age on our fingers.
he/she...them.
no one knows where the
innocence flies when
we are pushed
to let go of anything
(everything)
that represents us.
it just leaves unexpectedly
like a rolling wave,
a draining disease.

ii.

i tried holding on but he
shouted at me,
"don't you see, can't you tell."
i was never blind
but i also could never find
a release
anywhere to realize what i
had done and why.
there were questions always
floating just
above my head but my
fingers never
ventured up into the air to
reach for them.

iii.

and i apologized over and
over again in my head.
you couldn't have known...
you never
showed anything except hard
eyes and tight
knuckles.
i never knew who you were,
you never fought me
into the burning fire.
we just stood there,
unharmed for awhile.

i wish i could have realized
where we were
coming from and why we
always felt so dead
in the end.

© Copyright 2005 Kelly Landis - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-18 01:21 AM


wow, I really like this one
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2 posted 2005-07-18 01:25 AM


I really like this poem.

-Smile, it's not a sin.

StarryEyed3
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since 2005-06-26
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bostonia
3 posted 2005-07-18 05:23 PM


once again, another great entry. so sad, but so perfect...
tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
4 posted 2005-07-19 06:24 PM


everything goes together so wonderfully

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

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In The Clouds...
5 posted 2005-07-21 05:20 AM


I liked this alot!
*Holly*

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