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0 posted 2005-07-17 01:36 AM


Dusty Dancing particles
Floating off my tounge.
Kissing.
Soft seeping shine filled lips,
Waiting for my pores.
Inhale me you toxic friend,
Keep me cancer,
Never let me go.
Dancing,
Kissing,
Spinning,
SPUN.

Im sorry i've failed you all.

© Copyright 2005 Ashley Schell - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-18 01:12 AM


this was very confusing!
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2 posted 2005-07-19 01:23 AM


yeah, sorry about that.
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3 posted 2005-07-19 01:26 AM


don't be sorry just because I didn't "get it" doesn't mean that others won't...
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4 posted 2005-07-19 06:21 PM


hmmm... i dont get it either but dont feel bad sometimes that happens. i am sure it has some inside meaning to you

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

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5 posted 2005-07-19 09:09 PM


it's a good poem...i just dont really get it.

-Smile, it's not a sin.

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