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aussie teen
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0 posted 2005-07-11 06:45 AM



coming to grips
im having a baby
what will you say
when i bring the news

will you be happy
will you be sad
will you be angry
what will you do

thinking about you
thinking about me
thinking what will i do?
thinking thinking thinking

what to do
who to tell
what will my family say
what will my friends do

wake up in the morning
sharp pains coursing
all through my body
cant move, cant breathe

my baby gone
my body not ready
my mind reeling
my eyes crying

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

© Copyright 2005 Ruth - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2005-07-11 12:22 PM


if this really happened to you, please tell me you have been to a doctor!!!

If it's "just poetry" well then you sure made me feel for you!

Cloud 9
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2 posted 2005-07-11 12:52 PM


I know this feeling. You wrote this well.

I hope things are o.k.!!

tearsoflove13762
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3 posted 2005-07-11 04:00 PM


wow i hope this is just poetry its crazy how you made me feel everything someone in this situation would feel. good write

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

aussie teen
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4 posted 2005-07-12 07:20 AM


thankyou everyone for replying....
i am ok... just a lil bit worse for wear.. i have seen a doctor and im ok it could have been a lot worse...
thankyou everyone again for replying..
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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5 posted 2005-07-12 11:55 AM


I'm glad you have seen a doctor and are ok. That must be one of the hardest things to go through...(((hugs))) I'm sorry you did.
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6 posted 2005-07-12 01:40 PM



~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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In Your Poetic Mind
7 posted 2005-07-12 07:34 PM


ruth...

feeling this as well....hugssss to you....sorry for your loss....

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

* shining star*
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8 posted 2005-07-14 11:58 PM


wow, im sorry if this really happened to you.
*bleeding 4 eternity*
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9 posted 2005-07-17 03:00 PM


i'm so sorry you had to go through that. you really expressed those feelings in this poem!
aussie teen
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10 posted 2005-07-20 06:26 AM


thankyou all for your kind words and thoughts.... ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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11 posted 2005-07-21 04:24 AM


Im sorry that all this has happened to you but you really have a way with words to describe the whole situation!
*Holly*

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