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skoolyardturtle
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since 2005-06-28
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0 posted 2005-07-10 07:07 PM


wandering
wondering my soul begins to open
to a brand new sky and stars
i sense you nearby
but no where to be found
the cobalt eats away at my soul
needing feeling wanting
it gnaws at my insides
and routes through my heart
a river running to nothingness

i know that there is no one to be found
the road looks empty from here
there's no one for miles
as i hitchhike my way to the end of the highway
there is no one to walk with me
as i wait for someone to lend me a hand
there is no one with me.....
....you will not come
because i cannot see
the endless road that leads to the blue that cannot be overcome
without someone to hold on for


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with you
1 posted 2005-07-10 10:40 PM


yep....
I really like the way you write!

electricxheart
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far away from home.
2 posted 2005-07-14 12:05 PM



I love the images in this.
Awesome write.

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3 posted 2005-07-14 11:33 PM


This is good...i really like this style.
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