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tearsoflove13762
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0 posted 2005-07-08 12:57 PM



My day will come,

with that fifteen minutes of fame.

Wonder what it will be for,

I'm guessing it will be lame.

dont wait for me.

im a let down, you'll see,

just a waste of time,

but one day my day will come.

love will make you beautiful

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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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1 posted 2005-07-10 12:15 PM


Interesting idea...Not really sure what i think yet...

_me

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

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2 posted 2005-07-10 12:53 PM


why wouldn't it be something wonderful?

skoolyardturtle
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3 posted 2005-07-10 06:37 PM


it's almost depressing in an unsatisfying way, if you know what i mean
tearsoflove13762
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4 posted 2005-07-10 11:15 PM


it never is wonderful.

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

skoolyardturtle
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5 posted 2005-07-12 12:44 PM


try waking up every morning hoping for something good, and it will...for example...if someone tells you not to think of the color red, what are you going to think about? everything is how you make it out to be.  all that matters is that it's wonderful to you, so what if it turns out to be lame, you know?  Keep writing, i'm becoming a fan of your work.

turtle

tearsoflove13762
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6 posted 2005-07-12 03:58 PM


hmmm... reverse physcology(sp?) i heard it works ill try lol

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

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