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tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-07-07 11:02 PM



It starts out as a simple wish;
until it spreads like a wild fire in one instant.

It takes on a powerful glow;
that can be seen for miles and miles.

It is my life;
let it burn.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

love will make you beautiful

© Copyright 2005 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2005-07-09 10:47 AM



Intresting concept

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 184
far away from home.
2 posted 2005-07-09 06:26 PM



I like this a lot. So simple but such
deep meaning. Awesome.

-Kelly

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
3 posted 2005-07-11 07:05 AM


i feel the same way and this is really similar to the way i live... nice write
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
4 posted 2005-07-11 03:56 PM


thanks guys!

LOVE NEEDS TO DIE

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