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skoolyardturtle Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 96 |
feebleness what do you feel right now? Is it the silence of two close lovers? or the awkward moment of two strangers? the sun was closing shop when i had come to know you you had liked many things and had come a long way to live the way you always wanted to live in the way you wanted is what you said you longed for i live in the way i don't plan to i live a life on fire the flames consuming my human soul consuming my soul till there's no more in this purgatory this small bubble this sky and stars in the life that you want to live and the life i plan to abandon |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
I like this a lot. It's depressing...and I like depressing poems. You can feel the emotion. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
:sad: Keep it up Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really like the way you write  |
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