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A wAkE Up ThuNdeR
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A wAkE Up ThuNdeR |
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SwT DeViL Junior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 26London |
this was also based on the london attacks. when the bomb blasted in kingscross as i live near there.i herd it but i thought it was a loud thunder. but then i found out it wasnt. hope you like it i knw i can improve it and the punctualtin might be bad and that. but dont worry il fix that. when i realise it. take care ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Was it a thunder a really loud one or was it something else that caused the bang. As it woke me up from my deep sleep as it broke my dream the one about a blast. Out side it was a world of frozen silence with only shocked and confused faces. Was it a thunder a really bad one that caused the trauma we are living in. There’s people waiting searching for their lost ones the ones went out as normally as usual without and expect or a sense of what has happened. It wasn’t a thunder not a bad loud one it was a bomb that did this to all of us. ***...$wT DeViL...*** I'm Me... Coz I'm Not U... Ur U CoZ Ur NoT Me... [This message has been edited by SwT DeViL (07-07-2005 05:58 PM).] |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
wow thanks for sharing. i have friends in london right now and still havent heard from them so i dont know if they are ok. Was it a thunder a really bad one that caused the trauma we "ARE" living in. the only thing i saw wrong was there needs to be an are there. |
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SwT DeViL Junior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 26London |
hey tearsforeva glad you liked it.... im sure your freinds are ok....dont worry much about them. jst hope they all good init. and fnx for reaading and commenting. take care ***...$wT DeViL...*** |
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