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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

0 posted 2005-07-05 10:31 PM

Could you say to me
that she really means nothing?
And could you swear to me
That the tears in her eyes
are nothing?
Could you prove it to me
That her love means Nothing
to you anymore?

In her eyes, I see the same that I know
But towards the same man we look
I would swear that I'll love you
Forevermore
but Can't you swear to me
That I'm your only?
Can't you promise me
That she means nothing?
Please promise me
that she means nothing.

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

[This message has been edited by CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa (07-06-2005 05:06 PM).]

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

1 posted 2005-07-05 11:05 PM

i swear you and i are the same... ive been proving myself and competing w/ her for 4 months... gosh im adding this to my library.

love will make you beautiful

electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

2 posted 2005-07-06 09:22 AM

I know this feeling and it's the worst
having to compete with someone else for
the guy that you love. I thought you
expressed your emotions beautifully.

-Kelly

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

3 posted 2005-07-06 10:53 AM

and for a title how aboug "Please Promise Me"

love will make you beautiful

SarBear
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since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

4 posted 2005-07-06 08:44 PM

that's so well written. I've read some of your other stuff and you are really talented.

WranglrButts9
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since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

5 posted 2005-07-09 02:28 AM

Yet another awesome poem from you, and still another that I can relate to perfectly right now. This is one of the worst feelings in the world (or that I have experienced). Going into it with the intent of actually having a relationship, then being hit with the realization that you & the other person may only be friends with benifits, or experiencing "lust, not love" crushes you!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2005-07-09 10:45 AM

What a cute poem

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

7 posted 2005-07-10 12:12 PM

thanks for the comments you guys...really appreciated.

<3...well, u know, me

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

8 posted 2005-07-11 06:50 AM

i went through the same thing last year and got my heart broken in the process which is only just starting to heal with tender love from my new partner... its never worth competing over someone because you always end up being hurt in the end....well written you capture thee emotions perfectly...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

~*BayBee*~
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since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

9 posted 2005-07-22 03:50 AM

This was an excellent poem! Im actually in that situation right now! But what more can we do than sit and wait to see if we are tha one he wants.. Good job and i'd like to read more!
*Holly*

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