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0 posted 2005-07-02 02:08 AM



Each beat,
Each note,
Each smile,
Stolen now,

Unhealed scars,
Intact nightmares,
Sadness behind a smile,
One hurt at a time,

First time,
Now last,
Unfilled wishes,
Cold kisses,

Without love,
Without a heart,
I am now two,
Broken eternally.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-02 02:11 AM


this is so sad....but written very well
spaz02
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2 posted 2005-07-02 09:04 PM


i really like this, cuz this is how i feel alot of the time! keep it up...this is a good write!
spaz02

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3 posted 2005-07-06 08:46 PM


that's really beautiful. I like it a lot.
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4 posted 2005-07-07 07:25 AM


this is really beautiful and i knnow exactly how how feel... in time the wounds will heal and you will become one again... wel written and keep writing to release your emotions..
keep them coming
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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