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tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-07-02 01:55 AM


He's got this dream about buying some land,
he's gonna give up the weed and the one night stands.
And then he'll settle down,
far away from his home town.
Raise his little girl Keegan,
and watch her little life begin.

It was the beginning of his junior year,
getting his girl back was his only fear.
She wantded to take him back,
but all of her friends would say she is on crack.
So she continued to tell him no,
and then one day the cops put him in cuffs and said let's go.



© Copyright 2005 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
spaz02
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 74
USA
1 posted 2005-07-03 02:03 PM


this reminds me of someone i once knew..it's powerful..
tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
2 posted 2005-07-04 09:02 PM


thank you. its mostly true and about myself
SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 205
Massachusetts
3 posted 2005-07-06 08:48 PM


that's good keep it up.
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