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spaz02
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since 2005-06-28
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0 posted 2005-06-29 11:29 PM



"ROSES"

Roses are red
Violets are blue
and this pretty face
is all for you

Cause what you don't know
won't hurt you a bit
and this pretty face
isn't all that great

'Cause if you look inside
The fakeness in my eyes
you'll see this pretty face
isn't always that way

so look real deep
deep down in my soul
and you'll see all the lies
That I have to hide

I will always hide
Behind this magic mask
and on lucky days
you'll see the truth

If only you knew
My secrets and lies
you might understand
the pain I hide

Maybe, just maybe
one of these days
I'll spill my guts
and tell it all

Roses are red
Violets are blue
and this pretty face
Isn't pretty at all.

© Copyright 2005 Amber Rose - All Rights Reserved
tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
1 posted 2005-06-30 01:22 AM


love will make you beautiful

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with you
2 posted 2005-06-30 01:26 AM


there is an edit button you know...that is better than reposting or "double posting" the same poem again with such slight revisions as to not be able to tell what you changed....please do try to keep in mind, that double posting is against the guidelines... thanks!
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