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0 posted 06-26-2005 05:30 AM       View Profile for Android 17   Email Android 17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Android 17's Home Page   View IP for Android 17

...dishonesty...

          ...of the mind...
           ...heart...

      ...sliding down my fingers...
                ...it lingers...
       ...knowing it has gone too far...


    ...i kry ...
                 ... making sense only of
...things that aren't...
      ...real...

...it doesn't krawl bak...
                ...i die...

© Copyright 2005 Alex-lee Hryhorczuk - All Rights Reserved
shara
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1 posted 06-28-2005 05:28 PM       View Profile for shara   Email shara   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shara

i like this poem, i dnt quite understand it-i understand it but there is something htat lies beneath, it keeps me wondering, i like it though.

      shara
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2 posted 06-28-2005 07:07 PM       View Profile for Cloud 9   Email Cloud 9   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cloud 9

Understanding this well. Reminds me of my ex.

Excellent.
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3 posted 06-28-2005 11:43 PM       View Profile for tearsoflove13762   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tearsoflove13762

sadly enough this reminds me of my boyfriend.

love will make you beautiful

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4 posted 06-30-2005 06:20 AM       View Profile for Android 17   Email Android 17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Android 17's Home Page   View IP for Android 17

Thanks for all your words!

And I think Cloud 9 snags the underlaying thoughts best!
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5 posted 06-30-2005 07:15 PM       View Profile for spaz02   Email spaz02   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spaz02

hey! i like this alot its nice...i want to read more from u..keep it up!!
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6 posted 06-30-2005 10:29 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Hey stranger It's nice to read from you again. I really liked this.. as was mentioned before, it's more what isn't said than what you do say.. you say just enough, and we understand the rest. That takes a very high level of skill, something I have never attained. I really liked this

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

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7 posted 07-02-2005 09:19 PM       View Profile for Android 17   Email Android 17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Android 17's Home Page   View IP for Android 17

Spaz, Lovebug---thanks alot for your comments! I really appreciate them!
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8 posted 03-02-2009 06:27 PM       View Profile for Valkyrie   Email Valkyrie   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Valkyrie

interesting but good.
 
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