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SwT DeViL
Junior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 26
London

0 posted 2005-06-23 11:30 AM



jst sumin i dnt understand....sumin im goin thru....wich ain finishin...hope u like it
I’ve been in a dream,
a dream which lasts
lasted for a very long time
and still is lasting
when am I going to come out of it
when am I going to wake up

Every morning I wake up
I awake but I’m still in a dream
in a dream which is lasting forever
and ever....……

Just want to forget this dream
all the good moments and the bad
I just want to forget everything.....
every second of it

Someone please wake me up
someone please help me come out
I’ve been in a dream
a dream which is lasting for ever
and ever..........


***...$wT DeViL...***

© Copyright 2005 Naj - All Rights Reserved
shara
Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 69
florida/USA
1 posted 2005-06-28 05:26 PM


interesting...i like the set up, it was different from what i am use to, i guess that is wh6y i liked it so much...
    
     shara

tearsoflove13762
Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
2 posted 2005-06-28 11:44 PM


I liked the idea but too repetative in my opinion.

love will make you beautiful

SwT DeViL
Junior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 26
London
3 posted 2005-06-29 02:40 PM


thanks every1...glad to know you all liked it
take care


***...$wT DeViL...***

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