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SwT DeViL
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0 posted 2005-06-23 11:26 AM




a poem i wrote about a month ago, around 3 in the morning as you can probably tell from the easy title, i was having simular dreams that meant something i hated. i didnt want to sleep. so i wrote this one night. hope you like it. i thik i can improve it,  


Its 3 in the morning and I’m still awake,
I hear the birds singing and trying to wake the morning,
I see the sky going brighter but I’m still awake,
the suns coming out but I'v had no sleep.

I’m scared to close my eyes and face the fear I need to see,
I’m scared to sleep cause then I need to dream,
I’m scared to turn of the lamp cause then its a room full of dark,
I’m scared to turn the music down cause then its a room full of silence.

Its 3 in the morning and I’m still awake,
the suns out but I'v had no sleep, not even for a second,
I’m scared to close my eyes and face my fear,
I’m scared of night as I have to sleep and see my waiting dreams.

A dream which is full of fear,
a dream which is a symbol of death,
I’m scared to see my dream of death,
Its 3 in the morning and I’m still awake.  


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1 posted 2005-06-23 11:56 AM


bad dreams..ugh..they an keep me awake too.. isn't it funny how naps during the day don't give you those creepy dreams?!
SwT DeViL
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2 posted 2005-06-25 05:30 PM


yes tru SEA
thanks for stopping by
take care

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