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SwT DeViL
Junior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 26
London

0 posted 2005-06-22 03:19 PM

The Poision of love Has reached me....
the Poision of love has reached me ....
the hatred of him has left me....
the scared beats of my heart takes his name....
the missing beats of my heart is taken over by his beats.....
the beats that make me fill so different and special....
the beats that made me trip.....
were your beats......
now that i accepted the two hearts 2 be 1
im scared of loosing your beats withing it all.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-06-22 04:37 PM

Welcome to Pip...
this was a neat write, I liked the style.

Please check your email for a special greeting!

SwT DeViL
Junior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 26
London

2 posted 2005-06-22 05:41 PM

hey Sea thanks for everything. commenting, reading and sendind me that e-card. yh i know abt all the things piptalk doeses as i been reading most of the poetry from here for quite a bit but i wasnt aloud to become a member.
but many thank
il be commenting on ur work and everyone els
take care

***...$wT DeViL...***

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-06-22 06:12 PM

cool

I'm glad to hear you know your way around...enjoy!

SwT DeViL
Junior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 26
London

4 posted 2005-06-23 11:20 AM

thanks SEA....
take care

***...$wT DeViL...***

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-06-23 11:47 AM

Naj~

Hope you enjoy your stay~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-06-23 02:00 PM

Welcome to Passions Naj!
Enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

SwT DeViL
Junior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 26
London

7 posted 2005-06-23 04:59 PM

thanks everyone
you people are so sweet
lolz
take care

***...$wT DeViL...***

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