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tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2005-06-04 09:34 PM

It’s the words left unsaid that remind me
You’re the one that got away.
I know that you’ve forgotten what feels like
To know that something got in the way.

Trying to see past the never ending images,
Remembrances of this vigorous game,
I consider whether you were ever there,
And wonder if love was worth all this pain.

It’s the sunsets at night, the walks in the rain,
That remind me you’re no longer there.
The only person you notice now is her,
And you never knew how much I truly cared.

Time goes by and I’m tempted to run back
But I know that no matter how hard I try,
I’ll always miss you, it’s an untreatable scar,
But I’ll never be the one to catch your eye.

I’m not going to put myself through that again,
The pain of seeing what we always were,
Cause, deep inside, I know it’s true,
To you…I’ll never be as good as her.

-Erin

AIM-blueyed angel940
She's a question without answers...

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2005-06-04 10:19 PM

I know exactly how you feel. Nice work, as always. ~Jess

"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return" -Moulin Rouge

I_dont_know_me
Junior Member

since 2003-12-08

Posts 48
UK, Cymru

2 posted 2005-06-05 04:01 PM

I love it! I havent read your work in a while! i can always relate thanks for a great read x x x

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2005-06-11 05:28 AM

this is beautiful... it reminds me of my ex and how i could never live up to his previous girl... well written you capture the emotions and essense of this cruel emotion.....
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-06-11 11:14 AM

O M G
this is sooooooooooooo excellent....
I am keeping this...
so much I can relate to, even if it is an old scar....
well done

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

5 posted 2005-06-12 08:39 PM

makes me sad...but it is a wonderful poem.

thanks for the read.

<3 karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

6 posted 2005-07-22 03:56 AM

This was a very good piece of work! I can really relate to this! Great Job!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

7 posted 2005-07-25 10:46 PM

And you know what is worse is when he choses you only wanting you to become her lol. I know this. Pain ful. You are believe it or not worth more than some guys heart.

-JUju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

StarryEyed3
Member

since 2005-06-26

Posts 58
bostonia

8 posted 2005-07-26 04:58 PM

so sad but so perfect. i like your rhyming. keep it up.

"and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been
if i'd only thought of something charming to say..."
-death cab

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