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young_blood
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0 posted 2005-06-04 12:02 PM


The concrete screams again;
how can it not with
all of our soles slammed
against its mouth?
So we plug our ears with
dynamite and light the fuses
to drown out the sounds.
So we blow out our skulls,
we're out of our minds,
to quiet the senses
that tear at our being.
But we still march in time
to the beat of some drum
and still the concrete screams.
One pain for another.

© Copyright 2005 Alex Lewis - All Rights Reserved
Lexy
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1 posted 2005-06-06 09:30 PM


mmm. I have missed reading your work.

young_blood
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2 posted 2005-06-09 04:01 AM


thanks lexy
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with you
3 posted 2005-06-09 11:14 AM


I really like this
young_blood
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4 posted 2005-06-09 01:09 PM


thank you so much
Alicia
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5 posted 2005-06-09 03:33 PM


intense. i've been known to place an ear (not a boot) against it and have heard many things...your poem has my mind in a spin. thanks for sharing it.
young_blood
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6 posted 2005-06-10 10:50 AM


i'm glad you appreciate it.
cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........
7 posted 2005-07-12 05:13 AM


boomba. refreshing to read dark yet unmelodramatic-i-want-to-jump-off-a-cliff poetry. kudos, child.

fall quietly...

young_blood
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8 posted 2005-07-13 01:57 AM


thanks
skoolyardturtle
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9 posted 2005-07-13 03:58 AM


that was pretty good
* shining star*
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10 posted 2005-07-14 11:59 PM


that was a good poem.

-Smile, it's not a sin.

*bleeding 4 eternity*
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11 posted 2005-07-17 02:32 PM


I really liked it
Kaos
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12 posted 2005-09-01 10:34 AM


definately cool

"Aerials,   in the sky,
When you lose small mind,
You free your life."
- System of a Down

young_blood
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13 posted 2005-09-01 05:57 PM


thanks all.
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