navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #7 » I Am
Teen Poetry #7
Post A Reply Post New Topic I Am Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
tearsoflove13762
Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-05-19 09:56 PM



I am myself.
Made up of beauty and trust.
I hold a story.
That no one else knows.

I am a rebel.
Made up of breaking rules and curfew.
I hold an adventure.
That no one else appreciates.

I am a friend.
Made up of honesty and hugs.
I hold a loving heart.
That every one takes for granted.

I am a map.
Made up of several different cities and states.
I hold a destiny.
That no one else can have.

I am a diva.
Made up of high heels and gaudy jewelry.
I hold my own sense of fashion.
That no one else understands.

love will make you beautiful

© Copyright 2005 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
youcan'tseeme
Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 88

1 posted 2005-05-19 10:56 PM


It's interesting and entertaining to hear the pieces of yourself

Thanks for posting

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
2 posted 2005-05-19 11:57 PM


This is rather ironic, because I was just considering writing a poem like this.  Too bad you beat me to it.  Oh well, I'm just glad it was done well.  I like the idea, obviously, but I also like the execution.  This is really great, though I do think the ending a bit abrupt.  I was half expecting more.

                                     -Rich

"I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless"

shara
Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 69
florida/USA
3 posted 2005-06-28 05:11 PM


you go girl...i like this write.


       shara

tearsoflove13762
Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
4 posted 2005-06-28 11:45 PM


thanks for the comments.
rich, go ahead and write your own version. I would love to see it.

love will make you beautiful

spaz02
Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 74
USA
5 posted 2005-06-29 08:56 PM


i really like this i think alotta people are like this...lol..its gr8....!
* shining star*
Member
since 2005-06-29
Posts 76
PA,USA
6 posted 2005-06-29 11:40 PM


I think this poem is awesome. You described yourself in a beautiful way.


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #7 » I Am

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary