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Dustin462
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since 2002-08-09
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Selah, WA

0 posted 2005-05-16 08:47 PM



So yea
I'm thinking I like you
And not just as a friend

There are times where I know what I want
This time that wanting is you
And not just as a friend

We do spend time together, but not enough
I just want to hang out
And not just as a friend

I Lie in bed
Just thinking of you
And not just as a friend

I just hope one day
one little day
That things will fall in my favor

That one day
I will be with you
And not just as a friend

© Copyright 2005 Dustin A. T. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-05-16 11:11 PM


awww, this is too sweet...I hope you give this to the intended
Poems of Autumn
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2 posted 2005-05-19 11:48 AM


My goodness! I feel like that towards other guys sometimes and wish they felt the same way so I feel your pain, so to speak. Like see said, I to hope it reaches the intended.  
Dustin462
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Selah, WA
3 posted 2005-05-21 02:24 AM


Thanks for the comments, but trust me, this wo't see the eyes of the intended for a very long time.
aussie teen
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4 posted 2005-05-23 05:38 AM


this is so sweet and i too know how you feel.... you should show this to who its about... but you can only do that when your ready to do so..... well written and you capture the emotions and feelings perfectly
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

Michelle_loves_Mike
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5 posted 2005-05-23 08:04 AM


Hang in there dude, at one time or another, we've all been there.

If home is where the heart is,,,,,I guess the corner bar is where the mind wanders off to

shara
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6 posted 2005-06-28 05:17 PM


really sweet, you gotta show your cuddlecakes this, tell them how you feel.
  
    shara

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