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I can not forget
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I can not forget |
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I_dont_know_me Junior Member
since 2003-12-08
Posts 48UK, Cymru |
Staring blankly at the chair Were you’d sit And laugh at my jokes Walking along the path We took every Sunday Alone…. Now I’m alone Running through the rain Crying a million tears for you I can not forget how it felt to be loved by you And it hurts Because i know I wont even cross your mind |
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youcan'tseeme Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 88 |
i liked this  i could feel it when i read it nice |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Oh, wow. I can relate to this sooo well. Especially that last part. Im sure alot of other people can relate to this as well. Short and bittersweet, I love it. Thanks for sharing.  If I could fall asleep tonight you know I’d dream of you and wake up wondering why my heart is so cold ~WinterWren~ |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I think heartbreak is just something that's common across human existance. As is the fact that it makes great cannon fodder for us poets. I must have forty or so poems like this one, and it never get's easier. I'm sorry you're going through this. Just remember, you're not alone. -Rich "I am a part of the world that I hate/I wish the end would come faster, my world's a distaster," - Crossfade "Starless" |
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I_dont_know_me Junior Member
since 2003-12-08
Posts 48UK, Cymru |
Hey thanks for the comments, i know theres a million of these but i ahd to convert my feelings and anger somehow, thankyou for taking the time to read very much appreciated it x x x |
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