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LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2006-07-01 09:48 AM

this is a song i wrote, i just recored my first cd and its on that

where did time go
tomorrow used to seem so far away
but now yesterdays gone
and we start today
in the very same way

where did the light go
it used to glow
it used to shine me through my way
but its become so dark
and i cant see
ive never been so afraid

but things come and things go
when will they come back i dont know
but when times are tough and things seem down
just remember it'll turn around

where did the music go
it used to play so loud
is it me or did it fade
i miss its melody
the way it sang to me
oh how i wish it would have stayed

but things come and things go
when will they come back i dont know
but when times are tough and things seem down
just remember it'll turn around

i think i see the light
its never shined so bright
once again i'll find my way
and whats that i hear
its music in my ear
oh how i missed how it played

but things come and things go
when will they come back i dont know
but when times are tough and things seem down
just remember it'll turn around

{in a million years i wont be over you}

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-07-01 04:21 PM

Yeah. This does sound like a song. Your CD? What's it called? Maybe I've heard of it. It flows like a song. Well...ya

                  Jessica

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-07-01 09:23 PM

Hey LOSTinTHISworld,

Neat song, I’m having trouble coming up with the melody it should be sang too though? I mean what I have could be off from what you have… is there a site or some place I can listen to you sing this? I like it a lot, just wanting to know what kind of music your using, is it piano, guitar, base, drums, or just vocal? I’d love to know… I think piano would be neat... or at least I tried it with piano and I thought that was good but im a little biased in that opinion. lol

Thanks for sharing this one with us, it’s nice to see songs mixed in with poems, but of course poems and songs are similar but sometimes it’s more interesting if you think of it in song qualities

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LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

3 posted 2006-07-04 10:49 AM

ummm.....you wont have heard it anywhere unless you live in ottawa. but its called becky...i will be famous one day so watch out for me! im working on putting it on a website...anyways thanx for the comments. take care. peace

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