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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

0 posted 2005-05-09 06:31 PM

A wandering eye
can do much harm
But not near as much
as a wandering arm
A hand, perhaps,
is even worse
and might deserve
a hit with a purse
But more horrible still
than hand, arm, or eye
is a wandering stranger
from the pants of a guy

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dont know where this came from, just random poem from italian class...go figure lol ::winking::

_keryn

I cant believe how long i waited
for the boy to turn into my man...

Now if i could figure out, if it was worth the wait.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2005-05-10 08:41 AM

haha...this one is great. there are few poems with a good sense of humor. thank you, i needed a laugh.
-alex
(look dodgechic, i said something nice

)

WranglrButts9
Member

since 2004-10-24

Posts 108
Iowa, US

2 posted 2005-05-11 08:30 PM

Lol, sorry I didn't reply sooner.. this is great! Not so ... depressing.. lol, I love it!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2005-05-13 08:03 PM

hey,
haha yeah this did make me laugh, n i was like 'did she just imply what i think she implied?!" :-O. damn! sometimes i think the pip guidelines make us like...weaker in our writing, which annoys me, but i understand why they're there. not saying this violated any guidelines or whatever, but it's very riske lol. i like it =) it is a nice change from the heartbreak stuff we've been having lately...

i think that we need to make a challenge of some sort to write happy poetry, but i can't think of anything creative. you should help...i'm not sure if you know what challenges are though. it's just where one poet writes a poem in a certain style or about a certain subject, and challenges everyone else to do so as well. i am asking you to maybe come up with one because this is one of the first funnier poems i've seen, and i think Stinky Twinkie does funny too...so come on ppl! make a good challenge (i'll keep thinking too)

sorry i didn't mean to make this all long and whatnot, but i really am interested in trying to get a few happier pieces in here lol.

thanks for sharing this, and think about the challenge!

bergundy

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

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