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Christioned
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 93
Huddling in the dark

0 posted 2005-05-09 04:58 PM



Cut the ties that
bind me here
sever the ones that
lead out
tear them apart
burn them away
I just don't seem to belong.
Losen the knots that
are tied to here
relinquish the hold that
has always pulled me back.
I don't belong to this group
I don't think I ever did
now I won't ever again.

© Copyright 2005 Andi Rex - All Rights Reserved
youcan'tseeme
Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 88

1 posted 2005-05-19 04:34 PM


nice strong vent of your feelings
WinterWren
Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
...Coming to
2 posted 2005-05-19 06:18 PM


Good poem. I especially like the end.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

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