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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
When your with me Nothing can go wrong Nothing can hurt me Nothing can tear us apart When your gone My mind wanders My body aches My soul screams Out to you When we are together My skies are blue My heart is only Beating now 'coz of you You brought me back From the edge Of my bottomless pit And saved my life The night we met Was going to be my last But you came over And changed my life When you arrived I was in your arms So fast just to make Sure you were real For your love For your smile For your eyes For just being you For all of this I thankyou live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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WranglrButts9 Member
since 2004-10-24
Posts 108Iowa, US |
*passes out on the floor* holy crap! you have noooo idea how much this is true to my life right now. Not only can I relate to it more than any other poem Ive ever read, but it was awesome! This is DEFINETLY going in my library... keep writing! And remember: once you hit rock bottom the only way to go is up! Bailey Good judgment comes from experience, |
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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
Absolutely Agree with WranglrButts*lol* This poem definitely kicks some serious butt. i loved it. Real, true, honest. Nothing bad i can say about it. Congrats! _keryn By the way, your hands are shaking... |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
thankyou so much for replying.... this was more to brush out the cobwebs from having some serious writers block over the last couple of months... im glad that you guys can relate to my work so you can say im not alone in what im going thru now... again i thankyou for the replies Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
im adding this too! sorry im a little late on this one i havent been around lately. laura love will make you beautiful |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
very meaningful piece, i enjoyed the read... i also like your signature quote that's cool. "I don't know who or where i am |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
thankyou everyone for replying.. live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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