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0 posted 2005-04-25 04:09 PM



After meeting you,
I have realized what is God,
And what is love,

From you I have learned,
What is a promise,
And what are rituals,

In my heart,
I only pray that you know,
I will wait for you,
Night after night,

You came like a storm,
Changed my life plan,
And my future,

After making me realize,
You changed-
And became my life,

From here on I stand,
Protecting our love,
Till the time is right,
And we shall dine,
On each others company.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-04-25 04:51 PM


definitely one of your better poems, I liked this very much...  
Xeonox
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2 posted 2005-04-25 05:03 PM


Thanks for your response.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

SwT DeViL
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3 posted 2005-06-22 05:51 PM


ur poems r very good i think...i enjoy em a lot.
keep it up
take care

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