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What I Will Do
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What I Will Do |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent 
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Is it wrong for me not to sleep at night, becase I don't want to dream of you? I fell for you, but you didn't catch me. Now I am just lying here on this cold, hard floor, wondering what to do. I will tell you this and it will all be fixed... "I think it is time I let you go, and that is so hard to do, because some part of me will be in love with you for the rest of my life, but the daydreaming, the running in place... it's not healthy. So this is me, cutting the cord. This is me, doing what I should have done eight months ago... saying goodbye." -hold on to the one you love |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
WOW, this is excellent. This explains alot about letting a loved one go. I love it!!! |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Hey Hun I know things arent going that great for ya and i want you to know no matter what you can always count on me here to be here for you! As far as the poem goes i think its wonderful!! As difficult as letting go may seem at the moment its probably the best choice you are going to make because theres someone better out there for you!! Look at this way letting go isnt really ever saying goodbye completely because like you said we always have a place in our hearts for them and they will always stay there!! Keep your head up hun i know things will work out the best for you!! Hugs and Lots of Love Chris |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Wow, I really like this. And I can relate to it so well right now. Excellent job, thanks for sharing. If I could fall asleep tonight |
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