maybe our hearts were just next in line.

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Teen Poetry #7

maybe our hearts were just next in line.

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

0 posted 2005-04-01 07:26 PM

rumbling around in my
veins somewhere,
we saved it for a brighter
day.
the tears are too
much for my taste,
she complains wandering
around
somewhere inside
the tv screen.
be quiet and stop letting
people know
how much you're hurting.

this mask calls for some
broken pieces
of respect,
sitting in the tiny box and
reading
magazines about pretty
skinny regrets
and pink lip gloss.
it's not what you think,
don’t feel.
don’t feel for the sun.

and we walked around.
love was present
but i wasn’t able to read
between the lines,
wasn’t able to read his
mumbling lips.
it was all illusions anyway,
just visions
of things that are always
kept a secret.
hushed hues and
darker moons.
stumbling around in the
attic and
never finding your way.
and she doesn’t
know,
you don’t know.
that today,
we are all broken
inside of our
shell.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2005-04-03 10:47 PM

wow. this is phenominal!
I'm off to read it again.

you continue to amaze me.

dodge_chick2003
Member

since 2004-01-18

Posts 136
California

2 posted 2005-04-04 03:27 PM

You continue to amaze everyone!!!! You write about things noone on here has and I love that. This poem has a lot of different meanings. Keep up the good work!!!!!

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2005-04-09 11:52 PM

all i can say is thank you for being able to write such amazing poetry. i feel like hell right now, and this does help.

bergundy

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

4 posted 2005-04-11 06:57 AM

Beautiful, and amazing...wow. Awesome job!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2005-04-11 02:08 PM

I love this! The end was my favorite part. Another one for my library.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

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