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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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since 2002-11-10
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0 posted 2005-03-21 09:50 PM



I Know…
I know that you and I can never be,
Because that would mean my dreams have become reality.
I know you don’t feel the way that I do,
But having you on my mind makes my skies so blue.

I know its hard showing you how I feel,
But if you can give me a chance I can guarantee they’re real.
I know we will probably end up being just good friends,
But I want much more than that so seeing you will never end.

I still know that after you read this nothing will change,
Even though I yearn for it to happen, I have to survive the pain.
I know my quest for love has to go on,
And I know hopefully it will happen before your gone

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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2005-03-22 08:23 PM


hmmm.
its truthful.
but not necessarily spectacular.
you got your point across. which is goood.

*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2005-03-24 11:33 PM


Hey you.
I'm so sad that this didn't work out for you, but you know that sooner or later she'll stop being so caught up with her ex and realize how much you love her.
Stay Positive!
Lol...love ya.

~Alli~

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tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
3 posted 2005-03-26 09:50 PM


i love you too!!! well hey like what has been said you got to the point i know this is just a poem u wrote to get the feelings out... it seems to have worked love ya and talk later
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