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tearsoflove13762
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0 posted 2005-03-20 08:18 PM


Somewhere between the procrastination, the homework, the friendships, and the nasty cafeteria food, the calls to old friends,the I miss yous,and the I LOVE yous,and the What are we doing tonights?

Somewhere between all of the changing and growing,and the skipping classes, the studying for tests,the pretending to be studying for tests,and the downright not studying for tests;I forgot.

I forgot what it meant to cry.

I forgot that pretending to be happy doesnt make you happy,

I forgot that pretending to be smart doesnt make you smart,and that pretending to be ok doesnt make you ok.

I forgot that you can't forget the past if you are afraid of the future.

I forgot that you can't control falling in love,and that you cant make yourself fall out of love.

I learned.

I learned that I can love .

I learned that its ok to mess up, and its ok to ask for help,and its ok to feel like crap.

I learned its ok to complain and whine to all your friends for a whole day. That somehow they'll make it all better .

I learned that sometimes the things you want most you just cant have, and I learned that the greatest thing about high school isn't going to be who is the most popular or going to be the parties or the drinking not even the hook-ups . . . Its the friendships, which means taking chances.

I learned that sometimes the things we forgive and forget are the things which we most need to talk out.

But, basically, I just learned that my friends, Both old and new, Are the most important people to me in the world .

[This message has been edited by tearsoflove13762 (03-20-2005 09:02 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-03-20 08:53 PM


Wow Laura this poem is really awesome!! I'm gonna add it to my library, hope you don't mind.

~Alli~

fearing-laughter
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2 posted 2005-03-20 10:50 PM


hey awesome...do you graduate this year too? woo class of '05! lol..seriously tho, cool poem. thanks =)

bergundy

At least we're still friends! At least we're still alive!--Alkaline Trio

WinterWren
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3 posted 2005-03-21 06:21 PM


This is so amazing. I can't tell you how much I love this. Im just blown away.
One of my favorite lines was, "I forgot that pretending to be happy doesn't make you happy."
This poem means alot to me. Thanks for sharing.

If I could fall asleep tonight
you know I’d dream of you
and wake up wondering
why my heart is so cold
~WinterWren~

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
4 posted 2005-03-21 09:37 PM


thanks for your comments... no i graduate next year... class of 06' woo hoo! LOL!

-hold on to the one you love

Lexy
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
5 posted 2005-03-22 09:09 AM


class of 05!
I miss my friends so much.
heck. I miss school like crazy.
damnable home school.
Its true though...
these people seem to create the rest of your life.

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
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6 posted 2005-03-22 07:24 PM


I absolutely love this. Thanks.
Lindsay
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since 2003-03-26
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7 posted 2005-03-22 10:05 PM


awesome poem! i loved it. keep on writing.

I don't know much at all, I don't know wrong from right, All I know is that I love you tonight
        -Good Charlotte

tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
8 posted 2005-03-24 06:55 PM


thanks all of you for your replies

-hold on to the one you love

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